Painting

I found this picture and it had great colours and layout. Then I started painting. This isn't finished, only like 2/3 done. Backround'll be easy to do. In the picture is milliner, DJ, part-time model etc. Fiona Timantti.
EDIT: Okay, I made some changes immediately, because her shoulders looked ridiculous.
Pictures before and after. The second looks more like it.